some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible,other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. which of these situations do you think is better. use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Young adults make choices for themselves as a result of various reasons. some young adults prefer to live with their families for a longtime while some want independence from their parents as soon as possible. this is a part of series of decisions which adults make while growing up and they make this decision for freedom, responsibility, privileges etc.
in my opinion, i support the option of living with families for a long time due to many reasons
firstly, Young adults who live with their families for a long time enjoy certain privileges which won’t be enjoyed by those who want independence as soon as possible. Some of this privileges can be explained with my own experience. Staying with my parents now even though i am their child, i enjoy free electricity, i don’t have to bother about paying utility bill or even bother about paying for food. if i was independent and living on my own, I would have to be worried about raising money for all these things which are basic needs of survival. staying with my family gives me the access of the variety of needs and it comes at a free and no cost.
Also, staying with families is a means of staying responsible especially for people who believe in morals, young adults tend to make series of decisions when they are independent that might not be good for them but they still go ahead to make these decisions freely because they have nobody to curb them. staying alone gives someone all the freedom and freedom being what it is, allows people to make decisions that might either have a positive or negative impact on them.
staying with families for a long time allows someone to stay responsible why still having people who can caution them on choices they make.
i believe firmly that adults who stay with their families long enough turn out more responsibly compared to those who live as soon as possible. our families love us and would always want the best of us so when they see us threading towards a negative path, they call our attention to it.
Also, young adults who stay with their families long enough tend to have a lasting bond with their families and this also helps them while raising a family of their own. i am of the opinion that stain g long among families pending when an individual will truly be independent will really help build a connection with siblings and parents. the essence of family and its concept is fully understood. Also, young adults are people who mostly are still trying to find their way through school, just graduating and still finding a job so they are still going through difficult times, at this point, the best decision to take is to stay with their families till they get to the status of independence but nowadays most young adults just want to get their freedom as fast as possible and getting away from home without any source of income or employment can lead to a lot of social vices or even lead young adults ton depression
these reasons are why i support young adults staying with their families for a long time before leaving to live on their own
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, so, still, while, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64403669725 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36486927396 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42752293578 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.878486 48.9658058833 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.882352941 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0588235294 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38033648928 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14116399942 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135544069818 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220300879008 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115137116019 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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