Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Some people argue that young people have more life to live and are exposed to the modern technology at a very early stage, so they enjoy it thoroughly as compared to old people. However, I strongly disagree with these people and believe that older people have seen and enjoyed life much better than young generation do, they still continue to enjoy and live much better than their posterity. I will support my viewpoint with following three reasons.
First of all, the modern technology has degraded our lifestyle in many ways. For example, children as small as five year old play games on mobile instead of interacting with their colleagues, enjoying the nature, its beauty. In the past, children in their free time used to visit temples, go to their relatives’ home, go to small jaunts near countryside and so on. They have seen and explored the world at much early age, in contrast to what todays’ generation children think. It is important for children to get exposed to good traits because this is the tender age where mental development happens. These same unwanted characteristics proliferates, hindering their future achievement in later part of life.
Secondly, young people lead a pell-mell life, full of competition and tensions. This weakens them, reducing their life time and hence less time to enjoy. For instance, people in todays’ world work from early morning to late night. Most of them skip breakfast, researches say that people who do not take breakfast tend to get old quickly. Consequently, their life span decreases. These people cannot enjoy their youth nor their old age. On other hand, older people have got a lot of time as they are retired, thus they take special care of themselves, visit spa, relax, waxing their age!
Finally, todays’ youth is so busy in their office work that they hardly get any time for themselves, to visit places, go to movies, parks and rejuvenate. Older people, on the opposite side get a lot of time to visit hillstation, watch old movies, listen to old songs, spend time with their spouse and so on. In addition to this, they exercise, meditate, do yoga- adding up to their good health.
To conclude, the issue of whether young people enjoy more life than older people is complex. Some say that young people are very modern, they enjoy life uniquely and lavishly unlike older people who rarely know any recent discoveries. Nevertheless, I still contend that older people enjoy much better life than young ones and young people rarely find equanimity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ions. This weakens them, reducing their life time and hence less time to enjoy. For insta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01650943396 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56659261481 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521226415094 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3770465914 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466187623898 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159566295233 0.076458572812 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190567925 0.0737576698707 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30960553142 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.25475855712 0.0645574589148 395% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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