Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
In this world lies a myriad of things that humans can not do all in their lifetimes. Within their lives, there will be times when they get to have better conditions to enjoy what they do to the fullest. In my perspective, youngsters enjoy life more than the elderly do.
First, youngsters have fewer matters to worry about and fewer responsibilities to fulfill than older people do. The older have many tasks in their daily lives such as taking care of their families and going to work. Additionally, they have to favor their children’s desires first for they are parents, thus their time for personal leisures will be reduced even more. Younger people, on the other hand, are carefree since they have less burden on their shoulders than their parents do. Without having to worry about other works, younger people can fully be immersed in their enjoyments. There are some cases in which some old adults may carry their computers and paperworks with their families during vacations in order to continue their unfinished assignments, while their children run on the fields and have their moments.
Second, young people can do more physical activities than older people can. This is mainly due to the fact that elderly people’s health is heavily affected by their age. They usually suffer fatigues and other illnesses, preventing their bodies from doing what their minds want them to do. In contrast, young people have more vitality since at their age time is yet to produce such weary effects on their physicalities. This is why young adults are apt to attend multitude experiences involving arduous movements like sports. For example, my brother and I are extremely energetic and we often participate in soccer events, yet my father who is now in his senior years barely runs for five minutes straight.
In conclusion, young people enjoy life more than older people do as youngsters have fewer duties to be concerned about and have more energy. I believe that people should do what they crave when their bodies are still spirited so that when people step into their older years they will not have to bear any regrets.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, still, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92200557103 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41881550476 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545961002786 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.414772618 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.941176471 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353437560577 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155189481364 0.076458572812 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170576042556 0.0737576698707 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285623090481 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138944874742 0.0645574589148 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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