Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree?

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Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree?

Everyone admits to the fact that childhood is the most serene phase in one's life. No one would miss the opportunity to relive that stage if there was a chance. Even most of the happiest memories fall back to that point in time. Mainly, this is because of fewer responsibilities at that age. Children are kept away from many

prospects like finance, health, sustenance of the family, etc., In my view, childhood is the best phase in one's life cycle and I will provide two reasons for support, which I will elaborate on, in the following paragraphs.

First of all, in childhood, almost everything a child wants is provided by parents. All the mundane tensions that are faced by parents constantly are nugatory for children. In their minds, they are the center of the universe. They do not know how the world works and so are not bothered by thinking about ut. Similarly, every important thing in a child's life is provided by parents or any other person. Some of the examples are taking care of their health, development both physically and mentally by the parents. Even in some cases, parents overindulged in providing as per their wish. Moreover, they do not know about the sad reality. Children do not realize how tough it is to survive and sustain in a complicated world of ours. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Recently, my mother had told me the things that I had done during my childhood. When I was 8 years of age, she told me, I used to cry for every small thing I wished for. My parents to soothe me would provide that and made me happy. Even now at the age of 23, I still think of childhood as a happy phase with regret of living in this adult life.

Secondly, being a child is peacefully because one would not work hard to make money. Having a lot of money is gleefully, but in childhood, there are parents to rely upon. Financial freedom is available to children until one becomes old enough to start an independent life. Children are devoid of aspects like savings, spending and other concepts of the economy because the burden of all these relies only on parents. Similar is the case when it comes to health. During childhood, parents try to take proper care of their children. On the other hand, care should be taken on his own. Nonetheless, there will be certain children who work at earlier stages for money but still, they have the confidence of resorting to parents in case of hardships.

In conclusion, there is freedom in almost every aspect during the nascent stages of life. Children need not worry about making money, health, studying well and also ingesting proper exposure to improve their maturity. Through daily chores are performed by some children in certain households, these are significantly less imperative when compared to various onerous tasks, which are dependent on the parents.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, well, in conclusion, first of all, in my view, in some cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72837022133 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56329183742 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527162977867 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4969537035 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5666666667 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0547975467367 0.236089414692 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160000957264 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284677953008 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0275549011874 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197548098261 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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