There is no shortage of debate about weather young people enjoy life more than older people , although many think this is a true statement , i think this is not the right idea . I feel this way for the two main reasons that i will explore on the following essay .
First of all , people should always know how to enjoy their life at any age , many people find always many ways to entertain their life , my own experience is compelling example of this . When i was 18 years old i was obsessed going to party and make new adventures and meeting new people . I was really active in a way that i really started to get lazy with my studies and important things in life thinking that its the time to enjoy life , at that period my dad came and about my studies and future and i told him thats my golden age and its the right time to enjoy life , but he convinced me that this idea is wrong by claiming that every period in life has her own pleasure . For example people enjoy going out and meeting new people at the young age but after that they will be married and enjoy their life with their kids , after that they can enjoy leading their kids to success and teach them they way to be happy . For that reason i was convinced that the pleasure of life does not depend on the age of the person .
Secondly , i strongly believe that old people can enjoy their life equally as young onces . For instance , i look sometimes to my grandparents life m despite they are old they enjoying their time with many activities . For example my grand mother have a charity work with small company for the animals and she is really enjoying her activities , in addition when i go with my uncle to see him play golf and how he really enjoys the game i really think that the pleasure is not really limited with the age . So maybe you can enjoy your life when your are older because your life probably will be more stable
Secondly , i strongly believe that old people can enjoy their life equally as young onces . For instance , i look sometimes to my grandparents life m despite they are old they enjoying their time with many activities . For example my grand mother have a charity work with small company for the animals and she is really enjoying her activities , in addition when i go with my grand father to see him play golf and how he really enjoys the game i really think that the pleasure is not really limited with the age . So maybe you can enjoy your life when your are older because your life probably will be more stable .
to assume , there is no brainier that enjoying life is not related to the age of the person . I took the idea from my dad when i was much more younger then now and the way my grand parents live make believe more that happiness and pleasure never die with childhood .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33204633205 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13048578457 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.341698841699 0.524837075471 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1092839125 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.25 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 61.0 5.5376344086 1102% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245085532959 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111750067986 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086990561631 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173953232221 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048083569816 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.43 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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