There is no shortage of debate about weather young people enjoy life more than older people, although many think this is a true statement, i think this is not the right idea. I feel this way for the two main reasons that i will explore on the following essay.
First of all, people should always know how to enjoy their life at any age , many people find always many ways to entertain their life, my own experience is compelling example of this . When i was 18 years old i was obsessed going to party and make new adventures and meeting new people. I was really active in a way that i really started to get lazy with my studies and important things in life thinking that its the time to enjoy life, at that period my dad came and about my studies and future and i told him thats my golden age and its the right time to enjoy life, but he convinced me that this idea is wrong by claiming that every period in life has her own pleasure. For example people enjoy going out and meeting new people at the young age but after that they will be married and enjoy their life with their kids, after that they can enjoy leading their kids to success and teach them they way to be happy. For that reason i was convinced that the pleasure of life does not depend on the age of the person.
Secondly , i strongly believe that old people can enjoy their life equally as young onces . For instance , i look sometimes to my grandparents life m despite they are old they enjoying their time with many activities. For example my grand mother have a charity work with small company for the animals and she is really enjoying her activities, in addition when i go with my uncle to see him play golf and how he really enjoys the game i really think that the pleasure is not really limited with the age. So maybe you can enjoy your life when your are older because your life probably will be more stable
To assume, there is no brainier that enjoying life is not related to the age of the person. I took the idea from my dad when i was much more younger then now and the way my grand parents live make believe more that happiness and pleasure never die with childhood .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29484029484 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07982563059 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452088452088 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0607626252 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.666666667 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9166666667 20.6045352989 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238984525122 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103507676689 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829559819047 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158602133241 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415722494497 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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