"Young people enjoy more than older people do.'
Life is a journey and has it own hardship and suffering- especially for older people- as they are the ones that have to bear all the responsibilities. The young people, especially kids and children, could easily enjoy their life as given the facility they are provided by their parents. Thus, I believe with the author that "Young people enjoy more than older people do.'
First and foremost, it can be explained by the typical example of my own personal experience. When I was a child or during my primary school, I had no any pressure of life. Doing homework was my greatest challange and apart from that, all my burdens were taken care of by my parents. All of my basic needs regarding food, shelter, and cloths were fulfilled by my parents. But, now when I am grown up, I have to bear all the responsibility for my own self-needs like students loan, rent, job pressure and many more. Life as a child was very fun and interesting as all my demands were fillfulled by my parents.
Secondly, during my childhood, I along with my friends would always go to play during the weekdays. We used to play all day and when I reached home tired and flagging, my mom would have made me dinner and even washed by cloths. But as time passes, all of my friends are busy in their own life and can't spend with me. It has been hard for us to just gather around nowadays. I still remember the time when we used to spend all night watching movies all weekend; however, now I'm so busy with my work that it would be hardly watch any movies or do any other recreation activities.
Finally, with great age comes great responsibilty. When we were small our needs were fulfilled by our parents, however, now it is our role to fulfill the needs and demands of our parents as they are too old to work. Apart from that, we also have look after the society and within the norms of the community. As a child it was ok to voilet some rules or have some fun; however, with time we all have realized that we all are bounded by the responsibilities, a social glass wall, that confines us and our activities.
In summary, I believe that the best part of life is when we were young and as we tend to get older various responsibilties are build up and we are confined by the glass wall that has been created by the society. There aren't enough recreation and entertainment opportunities and we shouldn't only look after ourselves but also our families, especially our small kids and old parents. Thus, young people definitely enjoy a lot than the older ones as they have no any mental burden rather than just doing their school homeworks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
Life is a journey and has it own hardship and suffering- especially for ...
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Suggestion: now
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Suggestion: now
... a lot than the older ones as they have no any mental burden rather than just doin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, apart from, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51680672269 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57348396461 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6669096204 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.380952381 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152238054689 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610657462298 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141725960446 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127178131878 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154540514763 0.0645574589148 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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