young people influence on future of society
Young people's roles and their effects on determining the future of the society depends heavily on the structures of that society. There are several factors to consider and the influence of youthful people in communities can vary from country to country, culture to culture, or even from one individual to the other. All that said, I generally disagree with the statement, and I believe young people today have a very critical and influential role in establishing the future of our society. I will demonstrate my ideas as follow.
First of all, today's world is affected highly by social media. Various trends, reviews, advertisements, even social movements are firstly formed in social media. The rising power of social media is undeniable and it is mainly led by young people. Let us consider how raising social awareness and recognizing injustice in various community setting by youthful people, and bringing attention to them in the past years has been an ample influence of young people on our society's future.
Secondly, as older people retire and fresh young people occupy jobs and begin their careers, they become the future leaders of our societies. Their insight and wisdom is what a community relies on for its future challenges. While young people take on their social responsibilities they are in fact asserting their effect on the future of that society.
Finally, apart from apparent obvious effects young people have on determining the future of a community, they are also in charge of educating our next generation. while they are future parents, and nurturing kids and adolescents is up to them; many of them may have jobs which include interacting with children and shaping their mindset. Imagine a young teacher who is starting his career as first grade educator. In addition to his direct roles in society, he is greatly responsible for the adequate and proper education of our next generation of social leaders.
In conclusion, young people have enormous effects on the future of a society through social media, by occupying new jobs in the place of older retired people, and as the people responsible for training and nurturing our children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, even so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12676056338 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71076673625 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52676056338 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3299085189 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412738545089 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134713063851 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114325592523 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250275050212 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084253195908 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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