Your friend wants to eat healthy, which of the following three suggestions is better? Be more disciplined and have a stronger will; Work with people who share the same goals; Consult a professional expert.
In the last decade, as time passes, people have realized that eating healthy is one of the crucial factors to living a healthy life. On that ground, they have been trying to attempt a myriad techniques to stay fit. In this regard, many people believe that the approach of eating healthy meals can be easily achieved by expertise. On the other hand, there is a group of people who hold an opinion of a self-disciplined approach is mandatory to acquire healthy life, while few think that having support from similar goal-oriented people who want to stay healthy is beneficial. Ultimately, from my vantage point, the former view contains more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that it is undeniable to say that having guidance from professional experts provides striking benefits to individuals since these professionals do have proficiency in the field of nutrients and health. there are professionally trained experts who can guide people according to their lifestyles. On the contrary, nowadays it has become a general tendency for people to depend on the internet wherein they might get wrong information to follow eating habits, and thereby, their lives might get into big trouble. Thus, it is not a judicious idea to trust other people on the internet who carry the same goal plannings. For instance, research was conducted at the University of California on 500 people who have gathered pieces of information from unreliable online sources and suffered from numerous health issues due to their inappropriate meal patterns. In fact, some of them had gone through serious life-threatening health issues. Therefore, it is reasonable to say that people should contact health experts to make their life physically strong rather than relying on the internet.
Another equally noteworthy point is that looking at this debate from another perspective, self-discipline is not easy to achieve for anyone in this busy life where even people do not have time for themselves in busy working schedules. even though it sounds easy to imply in life, there are higher chances that people might get distracted from their goals. Indeed, In such a scenario, people are required to have strong support from health trainers because they can constantly nudge them to follow the regular eating style which further enhances their eating habits. my life is a compelling example of this. Two years back, I realized that my weight reached 98 and I started facing several health issues due to my bad eating habits. hence, I directly hired a trainer who helped to through reducing my weight by following appropriate eating habits. Besides that, he used to treat me like a teacher in the school who constantly monitored my lifestyle and motivated me through various tactics in the whole process. hence, had I not met with this trainer in my life, I would not have obtained valuable knowledge from him which changed my life from an unhealthy to the healthy one.
All in all, by contemplating all remarks, I strongly believe that people should get in touch with health experts who want to eat healthily. this is because they can provide vital information about health benefits and they keep motivated people and make their lifestyle healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in fact, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2857.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10178571429 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7400091008 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 873.0 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1683835166 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.041666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260760198385 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743755917067 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530764542833 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166981082577 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535343153314 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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