YOUR FRIEND WANTS TO LOSE WEIGHT. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE
There is no shortage of opinions that losing weight is not a better approach. Crash dieting might have a negative impact on an individual. It may result in some underlying diseases. I have a different opinion. I strongly believe that losing weight is beneficial in many ways. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons to support weight loss.
To begin with, the first exquisite point to be mentioned is that shedding some body weight is tremendously helpful. It prevents an individual from chronic illnesses like hypertension, diabetes, cardiovascular problems etc. Moreover, it makes a person more active and energetic as it is said that a sound body has a sound mind. As a result, one can become more enthusiastic and passionate towards life. To exemplify, my younger brother put on a lot of weight when he was in 10th grade because of eating junck food. However, sooner he realizes that because of being overweight he was reluctant in participating in sports and became lazier day by day. Also, he starts getting sick frequently. Evidently, he starts eating balanced nutritional food with daily yoga and loses quite a lot of weight. Therefore, this example illustrates that if he couldn't lose some weight, God forbid he might get any chronic illness.
Secondly, to explain broadly, losing weight is very beneficial from a social standpoint. As one always wants to look presentable and beautiful always. Consequently, being over-weight we may not enjoy our every attire as good body shape plays a significant role in our dressing. For instance, it is best explained by my own personal experience. 10 years ago when I had my first child I put on too much weight. Although, it's due to pregnancy but that shatters my confidence a bunch. I feel so low while wearing any stylish dress.( To add on, I stopped hanging out with my friends and family. Eventually, my older sister motivates and helps me in my weight loss journey and I regain my self-esteem. Thus, this experience taught me that losing weight has a positive impact on one's life, if I had not done that I might have gone into severe depression and lost my valuable friends.
In conclusion, although some people believe that losing weight may be detrimental and harmful for an individual. I certainly have a firm belief that having good weight is beneficial and side by side rewarding as it keeps you healthy and socially confident.)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90754257908 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84254482703 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0398166621 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7037037037 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.48148148148 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180135069504 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464755875991 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466543981547 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115452530607 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218500613352 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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