What modern invention has the biggest effect on the way people live today? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.”
Necessity if the mother of all invention.It was the need to stay connected with friends/relatives near or far and to ensure alost immediate message delivery that led to the invention of telephone;however it is only human to want more, and thus to have real time communication gave birth to INTERNET.Today in this fast paced world, internet has become so pervasie that some refer to it as the fourth necessary thing to survive after food, clothes and shelter!If we have need some information, we rely on the internet, if we need to go somewhere, our plans comes to a standstill if there is no internet- they way internet has impacted how we live today has been further elucidated inthe following paragraphs.
The very ritual of reading the physical copy of newspaper has been replaced by skimming through headlines on a galore of Mobile apps.We prefer flipping through articles on FlipBoard or reading saved articles from Pocket app at leisure. Internat has thus changed the way we read news; everything that is hapening around the world is at our fingertips. One seldom watches the news on TV for breaking news, but instead gets live tweets on the phone.
Not only this, Internet has revolutionised the way we commute; there are no more scenarios of haggling for the right fare with the cab/auto driver; we no longer have to look for friends or colleagues or relatives to car pool. Apps like Uber/OLA/Lyft make cab booking so easy and convenient that at times one doesnt really need to buy a car; wherever you want to go you can book a ride using these apps which give you multiple options to choose from. Not only this, thanks to internet, we can go anywhere in the world, and google information about local taxis as well incase an app doesn't provide service there.
Further, we seldom see long queues at any sort of ticket counter these days- be it train, movie, or bus or flight, everything is online- we can book a ticket when we want and wherever we want; simply logon to the internet nd choose the ticket that you want, and lo behold it is done within a matter or few minutes.
Through online shopping, internet has changed the way we shop; through more secure and robust networks, it has transformed the banking industry - internet is one of the modern invention that in my opinion has had the biggest effect on people today.The aformentioned paradigms highlight only few of the many areas that have been affected by the internet, as highlighted it has become as essential as the basic needs to survive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, still, thus, well, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80610021786 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72258981011 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564270152505 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.444903707 48.9658058833 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.6 100.406767564 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.9 20.6045352989 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0785072826212 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279952927034 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037032244828 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735502456149 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122389186514 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 11.7677419355 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.1575268817 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.