while the passage states that the Terroeya trees decline can be stopped in three ways, the lecturer disputes these points.
First, the passage states that replanting the trees in its original place will finally increase its number. However, the lecturer disputes this point. he explains that the land conditions are not suitable to grow the trees again. The temperature increase in the land due to the global warming and draining the earth.
Secondly, the passage suggests that it is a good idea to plant the trees in a new location ( relocating the plant ). The lecturer argues this idea and gives an example of a plant that relocates to a new place that causes problems to support his idea. he explains THAT the outcome of planting the trees in a new location is unpredictable. he said that the Toreeya might spread and kill the origin planets.
Finally, the passage states that the Toreeya trees can be preserved in a research center. On the other hand, the lecture disputes this point. he mentions that the trees population will not be capable to resist the disease. Moreover, the plants that grow usually in the centers are large and genetically modifies. As a result, they can not survive and resist the disease in their environment,.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
while the passage states that the Terroeya tr...
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Suggestion: He
...ever, the lecturer disputes this point. he explains that the land conditions are n...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dea to plant the trees in a new location relocating the plant . The lecturer arg...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in a new location relocating the plant . The lecturer argues this idea and give...
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Suggestion: .
...in a new location relocating the plant . The lecturer argues this idea and gives...
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...at causes problems to support his idea. he explains THAT the outcome of planting...
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Suggestion:
...roblems to support his idea. he explains THAT the outcome of planting the trees ...
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...s to support his idea. he explains THAT the outcome of planting the trees in a n...
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...es in a new location is unpredictable. he said that the Toreeya might spread and ...
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... the Toreeya trees can be preserved in a research center. On the other hand, the ...
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Suggestion: He
... hand, the lecture disputes this point. he mentions that the trees population will...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trees'' or 'tree's'?
Suggestion: trees'; tree's
...sputes this point. he mentions that the trees population will not be capable to resis...
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'grow'.
Suggestion: usually grow
... the disease. Moreover, the plants that grow usually in the centers are large and geneticall...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... resist the disease in their environment,.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 211.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87677725118 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50898616376 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507109004739 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6278422166 49.2860985944 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831204484303 0.272083759551 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286722330313 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284921589236 0.0662205650399 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555855041734 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111059718241 0.0443174109184 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.3589403974 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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