While the reading state that the birds' population in the USA will decrease as a result of human activities, the lecturer expresses a different point of view.
First, the reading states that argue that the natural habitat of birds will decline due to human population growth and development which finally causes a decrease in the bird's number. However, the lecture disputes this point. he claims that the reduction of bird population will not uniform. some of the birds' populations will increase and some will decrease. Further, he mentions that urbanization will be better for some types and allow for its population to grow and secure a large habitat for it. Also, there are different types of birds that can be found now on the roads like hooks that can eliminate the rats and other rodents.
Secondly, the reading states that an increase in agricultural activities will coincide with the human population growth. Thus, birds' habitat decreases dramatically as a result of converting its habitat to agriculture use. However, the lecturer argues this point. He states that agriculture activity would be increased in the future but less land will be used. He explains that agriculture production will rise as a result of introducing new crops that are highly productive with less need for land.
Finally, the reading states that using pesticides to kill agricultural insects will also harm the birds unintentionally. On the other hand, the lecturer states that traditional pesticides cause the death of birds but it is changed now and the people solve this problem in two ways. new and less toxic pesticides are used. Also, genetically modifies crops are produced now which have the ability to resist the pesticide naturally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
While the reading state that the birds population in the USA will decrease as ...
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Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...wever, the lecture disputes this point. he claims that the reduction of bird popul...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...on of bird population will not uniform. some of the birds populations will increase ...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...on of bird population will not uniform. some of the birds populations will increase and som...
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Line 2, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for its population to grow and secure a large habitat for it. Also, there are d...
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Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: New
...people solve this problem in two ways. new and less toxic pesticides are used. Als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71115930729 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496453900709 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1711426584 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288115577398 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102049801593 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663631103867 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184723422652 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034524689666 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.