the passage and lecturer are both about genetically modified trees and its effect. while the passage suggests that genetically modified trees have different benefits, the lecture disputes this idea.
First, the passage claims that the genetically modified will survive in nature more than the natural trees. However, the lecture disputes this point. she claims that the genetically modified trees are uniform in their genetics ( do not have a variation in their gene that enable them to resist the changes in the environment like the natural trees) are which means more vulnerable to climate changes and likely die faster.
Second, the passage assumes that the genetically modified trees will bring economic benefits since they are growing faster and produce more fruit. the lecturer disagrees with this idea. she said that the farmers pay more money to buy the genetically modified seeds and it is illegal to use the seeds that produced from the genetically modified trees every year.
Third, the passage suggests that genetically modified trees could stop the overexploitation of wild trees. However, the lecturer argues this point. she said that genetically modified trees will cause damage and harm the natural trees. she explains that the modified trees usually growing in an aggressive way and outcompete the natural trees for resources like nutrients and light.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ause damage and harm the natural trees. she explains that the modified trees usuall...
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...that the modified trees usually growing in an aggressive way and outcompete the natural trees for re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 215.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36744186047 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49297986772 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483720930233 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.8371952705 49.2860985944 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263324984107 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10789966043 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755674052377 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185784777176 0.162205337803 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393419143595 0.0443174109184 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.