The American President Clay's life that wrong known aspects of life
In this set of materials, the writer and the lecturer are discussing the influences of American Elections at 1812. They are largely discordant with each other while the writer offers that president Clay has heroic figure in American History other claims that he is known many of drawbacks which he did during presidential mission. There are found some reasons; he enforced laws, pressures the congress to pass acts and leads to kill hundreds of indians people. The lecturer invalidates the writer’s assertions in all aspects and demonstrates that president Clay is not known heroic person in the American History that he has negative aspects. The details of the professor’s refutation are explained in the following paragraphs respectively.
Firstly, President Clay used laws subjective aim which includes serious results. For instance, his friend was elected by clay that is moral risk to the community.To pass The Chief Executive law, he enforce to congress.He used constitutional laws for own benefits,although he is a fame president and general in the past times. He has strengthened power via laws and not give an equal executive.
Secondly, he is known with bad fame among The American Indians,because American forces kill hundreds of Creek Indians in the battle. Moreover, he forced to removal Cherooke Indians from their land,cause of natural sources. This behaviour oppose the real human acts that in our time. In the Clay time, big part of the community believe in Clay whatever he want to do it. So, he get to force over Indian tribes that are known peaceful people. But, sources more important than humanity for Clay.
To sum up, books include different story about Clays, he has known a historical figure American History. The boos portrayed powerful, respectful and hero, these are common features. Especially, lecturer point out Clay’s need to limitless power and responsibility face to laws in order to use own benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...lay that is moral risk to the community.To pass The Chief Executive law, he enforc...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enforces'.
Suggestion: enforces
...ity.To pass The Chief Executive law, he enforce to congress.He used constitutional laws...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...f Executive law, he enforce to congress.He used constitutional laws for own benefi...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , although
...sed constitutional laws for own benefits,although he is a fame president and general in t...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...with bad fame among The American Indians,because American forces kill hundreds of Creek ...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cause
...removal Cherooke Indians from their land,cause of natural sources. This behaviour oppo...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'opposes'.
Suggestion: opposes
...ause of natural sources. This behaviour oppose the real human acts that in our time. I...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...e community believe in Clay whatever he want to do it. So, he get to force over Indi...
^^^^
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... Clay whatever he want to do it. So, he get to force over Indian tribes that are kn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 313.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26517571885 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96351324657 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3687958802 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9411764706 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181220340997 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583409817701 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588337355273 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10996670386 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364256815535 0.0443174109184 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 63.6247240618 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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