birds' problem with the glasses of the buildings which they crash all the time
The passage and the talk both discuss the birds' problem with the glasses of the buildings which they crash all the time. The writer contends that there is some solutions that can be utilized to save birds from window crashing. The lecturer, however, refutes the author's assessments. He demonstrates three reasons to cast doubt on the claims made in the reading.
The first allegation of the script against which the orator argues is that architectures can employ one-way glasses in the buildings, so people will see the outside but birds see a reflection and not the inside of the buildings and they will not try to pass. In contrast, the speaker finds this idea debatable. He bolsters his opinion by stating that the one-way glasses reflect like a mirror and they are as bad as the regular glasses. He notes that for example, birds will see the reflection of the sky or a tree and they fly right into them.
Second, according to the text, colorful stripes on the windows will help the birds to notice that it is not open and people also would see the other side. Although, the professor highlights the fact that birds see the openings as the open holes to get through which results in crashing again. Moreover, he says that if they make the strips thicker to make the holes extremely small so birds would not try to fly through, the house will be dark.
Lastly, the lecture contradicts this fallacy of the passage that magnetic field is a effective tool to prevent birds to fly into the glasses, saying that birds use this ability only in long distance trips. For instance, if birds travel from a cold country to a warmer one, they use their built-in magnetic compass to find the way. But, for short distances they only use their eyes and brightness of the light to navigate. Therefore, magnetic fields would not be a proper method to prevent birds from crashing to the windows.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...e passage and the talk both discuss the birds problem with the glasses of the buildin...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some solutions'?
Suggestion: there are some solutions
... all the time. The writer contends that there is some solutions that can be utilized to save birds from...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...zed to save birds from window crashing. The lecturer, however, refutes the authors ...
^^^
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y of the passage that magnetic field is a effective tool to prevent birds to fly ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67771084337 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3549266882 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1713416436 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348939590706 0.272083759551 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112587400318 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175884786563 0.0662205650399 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210494362373 0.162205337803 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119854650662 0.0443174109184 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...e passage and the talk both discuss the birds problem with the glasses of the buildin...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some solutions'?
Suggestion: there are some solutions
... all the time. The writer contends that there is some solutions that can be utilized to save birds from...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...zed to save birds from window crashing. The lecturer, however, refutes the authors ...
^^^
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y of the passage that magnetic field is a effective tool to prevent birds to fly ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67771084337 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3549266882 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1713416436 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348939590706 0.272083759551 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112587400318 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175884786563 0.0662205650399 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210494362373 0.162205337803 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119854650662 0.0443174109184 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.