Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the down of humanity, there is always some rules and standards which societies expect their members, especially the young ones, to follow. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that these rules have changed over time from past to our today's world. As far as these social strictnesses are concerned some are of the opinion that young people have more freedom nowadays, while other believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe to the first idea on the ground that people have some convinient that helps them to possess more freedom, among which the liberal governing of countries, supportive families, and supportive governments are of graet consequences.
To begin with, today societis are more liberal. To be more specific, people contribute more in managing their countries, so it stands to reason that why young people have more freedom in choosing their activities. For instance, teenagers can attend to some clubs and communities like atheist communities which was not possible in the past because of strict religious rules.
Secondly, it is crystal clear that families are very supportive of their childs these days in comparion with the past, that families had more children and they could not support all of them. As a result, young people can be more successful and also choose their future career freely. Moreover, being more concerned with parents, children are able to express their feelings and desires, which helps them to attain more independency.
Last but not least, providing many facilities by governments, young people have more options to choose for their life. For example, consider a teenager who wants to enroll in college, he or she has many chances of choosing from among them. Therefore, they have more oppotunities to attain truimph in quite a few aspects of life nad change their future in a way they yearn for.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that people, especially childerns and juveniles, have many flexible choices in their life that socities suggest them, because countries have considerably freedom for them, families support them significantly, and also they have governments' support for their choices. So, young people should not take the blessing of this freedom for granted and make the most of it, that is, fulfilling their heart desire and make their own future.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1926121372 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63051290909 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548812664908 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1391126507 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.2 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135772796948 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593965067854 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462116886194 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845013337239 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492259409723 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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