Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and ex
A Persian proverb states that, "Tell me who are your friends, so I can tell who you are." This proverb emphasizes the importance of friendship in one's life. As far as making friends is concerned, some are of the opinion that making new friends is more important than holding small number of old friends and brings immense emotional satisfaction, while others believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe to the latter idea on the ground that we being with old friends is much more fun and they are more reliable.
To begin with, we share much more common thought, memories, etc. with our old friends and the special bond we can acquire with them is not something that a person can gain in a recently-made relationship. This sharing of common thoughts and talks culminates in having long talks and laughing which is priceless. Moreover, when close friends gather together they will have much more fun, rather than some new friends that maybe even are shy still. For example, I have some close friends from college period that I really have enjoyable moments with them; we play together, tell some very delightful memories from the college, and go trip, which really make me happy. On the other hand, I have some new friends from work, who are by the way very nice people, but due to lacking so much in common, except our work and some daily issues, we never go trip with each other.
Second, emerging some accidents or difficult situation in the span of everyone's life is inevitable. With this in mind, close friends can be supportive in human most critical events of life. For instance, if someone is in desperate need of money, definitely it would his or her close friend who first comes to their mind to ask for help. Moreover, people need someone to tell them their secrets and talk to them about every detail of their life. In this regard, this is the old friends that can be trusted. For instance, I never talk with my new friends about my personal matters and instead always can tell my close friend and ask him for advice.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that small group of old, close friends paly in significant role in everyone's happiness rather than their new friends. Actually, there is a Persian proverb which states that "everything should be new, except for friend, which is best to be old."
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hasizes the importance of friendship in ones life. As far as making friends is conce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, still, while, except for, for example, for instance, by the way, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74757281553 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44728569579 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3500547166 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.058823529 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2352941176 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219364592239 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752576801386 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473067467795 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142159750112 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422285258959 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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