Dinosaures
The reading and the lecture are both about were dinosaurs endotherms or not? The author of the reading believes that dinosaurs are endotherms because of several pieces of evidence. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. She thinks that dinosaurs are not endotherms.
First of all, the author points out that the dinosaurs were endotherms because they were discovered in polar regions. The article notes that only animals that can sustain their temperature in polar regions could live in such cold weathers. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that dinosaurs may migrate or hibernate in such a cold climates. Furthermore, she states that by migrating or hibernating dinosaurs are not considered endotherms.
Secondly, the author contends that there is a connection among endothermy and the placement of and the movement of the legs. She/he asserts that endothermy enable dinosaurs to maintain their physical activity like running, and running would not be effective if the legs are not positioned under the body. The lecturer rebuts this argument. She suggests that the placement of the legs underneath dinosaurs is for holding more weight not for running because of the large size of the their bodies.
Finally, the author emphasizes that there is a connection among endothermy and bone structure. She/he states that structures called Haversian canals are usually the bones of endotherms. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that dinosaurs did not grow rapidly when the climate is cold. She puts forth the idea that Haversian canals enable any animal that his this feature to grow in a fast way even though the climate is cold or worm, which did not happen to dinosaurs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... because of several pieces of evidence. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'climate'?
Suggestion: climate
...may migrate or hibernate in such a cold climates. Furthermore, she states that by migrat...
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Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...or running because of the large size of the their bodies. Finally, the author emphasizes...
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Line 4, column 382, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fast way" with adverb for "fast"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ny animal that his this feature to grow in a fast way even though the climate is cold or worm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12142857143 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6194328721 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9433520803 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3529411765 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331561939213 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125483628024 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127214727008 0.0662205650399 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222996193615 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104078780299 0.0443174109184 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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