Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.”

In today's ethic life, friends play a vital role in orienting thoughts and view as well. Throughout the world, friends help people triumph over obstacles and achieve success. A controversial question regarding this issue is whether keeping old friends are worthwhile and maintaining our progress as it was previously or otherwise. Some people believes that sustaining old friends have substantial advantages and help us to paving the way toward better life and flourishing, whereas others have different view of point. I am of opinion that; the more you keep the old friends, the more you can keep progress toward prosper for some reasons. In ensuing lines, I will address the most discernible reasons.

The first exquisite pint to be mentioned is that, being familiar with them. In fact, we all know old friends and get entirely familiar with them, we are friend with each other for a long time, so we know behavior, morality, and other things. Thus, if we want to get new friend, due to unfamiliar with each other we surely encounter many problems until bring about a stable, so it might take long time. Take a personal experience as an example, back to university; owing to I was new in that environment, I did not know anybody; once I made a friend, my classmate. A first, we had no problem with each other, so we decided to became roommate; after some day we faced with remarkable problem that could not be able to endure each other. Consequently, I had to change my room. This experience taught me that, being familiar with each other and keeping old friend is better and a person would have no problem with them.

Another noteworthy aspect that should be reflected is this explanation is that being with old friend is fun. Indeed, because of knowing friend each other, they knew their friend, what to like and what thing make them exciting, so they can surprise each other. To illustrate this, I would like mention to a quote that I recently read in a psychology magazine, it stated " when two persons are with each other for 3 years, they probably might be with each other forever". As you can see, two persons that know what to like and other stuff, can create extraordinary time with each other.

Last but not least, in today's state-of-the-art world, having a friend that stay with you in every time of this world is a momentous thing. For example, I have a friend that every day teach me new things and always induce me to thrive, due to we know each other for long time and trust each other. Trust plays an essential role in retaining a relationship.

In light of these crucial reasons, I have strictly come to believe that keeping old friends not only can lead to make notably progress in every aspect but also can surprising you in terms of what you like because he or she know you completely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...erms of what you like because he or she know you completely.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 22.412803532 290% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2335.0 1373.03311258 170% => OK
No of words: 496.0 270.72406181 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70766129032 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.04702891845 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57838153621 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 145.348785872 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487903225806 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 419.366225166 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 3.25607064018 461% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 2.5761589404 388% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7930646125 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.19047619 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.619047619 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 4.33554083885 392% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
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Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163266450613 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582086394782 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452643204837 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10492715225 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288119663097 0.0443174109184 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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