Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
The Internet plays a vital role in our daily life. Nowadays, the internet is widely spreaded in all fields to complete daily activities, to save or find new information. The widespread use of the internet has mostly positive effects on life in today’s world only in small instances. Actually it has major negative effects which are more important to understand. There are following reasons to strengthen my view.
Firstly, the internet boasts curiosity in youth with lots of information provided by different websites. We are spending lots of time on the internet and trying to find happiness in the virtual world. The internet reduced social distance between two closed ones living apart but actually it has created long distance among family members. According to research in India 10% adolescents are addicted and having strong mental difficulties symptoms.
Secondly, the internet gives us a large space to save our images, documents and videos. Not only do men use the internet for securing information, large organizations and countries also hide their data on clouds. The experts of internet users gather the information and miss use it which is another negative effect of the internet. The simplest application of our mobile can share location and other bank details to antisocial people.
Thirdly, to switch on or off any electronic device is so easy, only on one commend internet do our work. There is no need to move from seat to operate any device. It is really appreciable but it reduces our physical strength and makes us lethargic. People engage in the internet and kill their time instead of doing physical exercises or activity. They saw lots of different videos to reduce weight but at the same time different types of interesting stuff engaged their eyes and people forgot to exercise.
Finally, the negative effects are not clearly visible as disastrous. That's the reason maximum people think the internet has a mostly positive effect but aforementioned reasons show the negative effects are more crucial and alarming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18373493976 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70925488935 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 145.348785872 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7997970773 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.05 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272375732594 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777240496356 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100861619923 0.0662205650399 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147065361439 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853407845553 0.0443174109184 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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