Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
In the modern era, new technologies, such as the internet, influence the lives of people in many aspects on large scales. Some people think these effects had horrible consequences on life. However, I firmly believe the expansion of this technology, such as the internet, has extraordinary impacts on human life. In the following paragraphs, I will elucidate my opinion.
Firstly, the general use of the internet rising knowledge of most of the people in all aspects of life in a positive manner. People's public awareness plays a critical roll in the quality of their lives. To be more specific, individuals who have a broad knowledge in many fields have comfort and easy life. Hence, the expansion of the internet, which has many websites for search about different knowledge, can help people to increase their knowledge just with a few clicks to achieve many sophisticated scientific facts. Therefore, humans use this new awareness in their real-life of them. For instance, whit broad access and use of the internet, the healthcare level in the international community has been very noticeable progress. Therefore, the widespread use of internet-based social media, such as Instagram, telegram, and so on, leads people to gain useful information in this field and use this knowledge in increasing their care from themselves.
Secondly, widespread of the internet has a positive effect on facilitating humans' communication with each other. From the beginning of history, humans relationships just limited to physical connections to other people. Because of the prevalence of internet usage and easy access to it in all places, people easily have virtual links to each other. For example, in recent months, with a large outbreak of COVID-19 disease, all people in many places were in the quarantine. Hence, they were prohibited from seeing each other physically. in this situation, exist of widespread of the internet was very useful because individuals can communicate with other ones from the internet. As a result, not only does this technology help them communicate with others, but it also takes away world society from a tremendous threat.
In conclusion, easy access to the internet has significant effects on people's life. Rising this technology not only does grow knowledge in all aspects, for increasing the quality of individuals' life, but they also facilitate their communication than the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...st of the people in all aspects of life in a positive manner. Peoples public awareness plays a criti...
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Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad knowledge'.
Suggestion: broad knowledge
... be more specific, individuals who have a broad knowledge in many fields have comfort and easy li...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... recent months, with a large outbreak of COVID-19 disease, all people in many pla...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ited from seeing each other physically. in this situation, exist of widespread of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 30.3222958057 211% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1373.03311258 148% => OK
No of words: 383.0 270.72406181 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30548302872 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94962674065 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498694516971 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 419.366225166 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7790129413 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216368645514 0.272083759551 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736805862727 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624638296575 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128819579565 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393545105194 0.0443174109184 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.8541721854 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 63.6247240618 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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