Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rapid growth of cities has a mostly positive impact on the development of the society. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, our world has experienced an unparalleled change in the last century because of the quick and huge improvement in science and technology. Societies in these cities encounter many unprecedented changes through these reforms. While many people are worried sick about the negative effects of this rapid shift in condition of those cities in which we live, others think that this change is a normal trigger to improve, even it happens a little bit fast. In my opinion, the rapid change in cities while growing poses positive impacts on cities. In the following essay I will elaborate on my reasons.
First, cities which grows fast provide their resedints the golden oppurtunities to improve their lives. Those cities absorb a tremendous amount of money which flow in the city and invest in the fundamental infrustructures throuth which those cities are able to make a basic infrustructure for a permanent improvement. For example, all large cities in United States has experienced these kind of conditions in the last century. While money flows in the city through this rapid growth, this money makes more money. The more money flow in city, the better financial condition the residents provide with. Recently, I read an article in socialogy about the rate of poverty in some cities in United states which surprisingly data shows that people has a better life style in whole aspects in cities like New York, Boston, and other big cities in which we saw a rapid change in last century rather than some cities such as Uta and New Mexico that they are experiencing a slow pace change.
Second, rapid change in cities is attractive not only for industry and money but also for people who interested in science and technology. It seems that all those factors intertwined and progress with together. For instance, nowadays we saw that cities with a fast pace of change are mekka of small research companies in scientific and technological fields. Those start-up companies absorb high-educated people from around the world to those cities in which cultural diversity is huge. The more cultural diversity, the more cultural dialogue and better human tolerance we see in those cities. These assortment of people from different etnicity, culturla background, and religion adds more resilience in tterm of socialogy in those cities. It is obvious that the racist movement has experience a decline in cities in which people from different culture are leaving togheter with peace.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that in this global village where we are living, a rapid growth of a city influence the city environment in a positive way. This is becasue of economic improvement that comes with this growth and becasue people from different background gather in an environment whcih make them to improve their resilience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 30.3222958057 231% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 5.01324503311 339% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1373.03311258 172% => OK
No of words: 461.0 270.72406181 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12147505423 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72395057566 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 145.348785872 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48590021692 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 419.366225166 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6155790177 49.2860985944 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.05 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.05 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141934545744 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512282491941 0.0996497079465 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386348305822 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097783942152 0.162205337803 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185625867212 0.0443174109184 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 63.6247240618 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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