Television Advertisements have deep impact on minds of the Humans. Personally I believe television ads specially directed
for the young children should not be allowed to aired. I feel this way for several reason which i will elaborate in following
essay.
First of all Young children are not having enough knowledge to judge any product and they easily get trapped to advertisements. This is what companies take advantage of they endorse their brands using the cartoon character and trap the innocents. Young will ask for the product for the product without having idea about harmful effects of that products. My personal experience is compelling example of this. My nephew who around 4 years old and a big fan of cartoon character Mickey Mouse. He use to be rebellious for each and everything where he sees Mickey. One day in advertise he saw a food packet in which they were providing complimentary toy of Mickey mouse and he started again asking for him. Though the product was unhealthy for young then also this campaigns are run on the television to attract the children.
Secondly sometimes few advertises are violent and lasts impression on child which may be not good for the child for the future years. For instance, few years ago their was a advertisement in which a child steals money from his mother's purse and buys toys for him. This spread wrong message in children and ultimately insist them to do them because they obviously learn from nearby environment. Of course this sort of campaigns should be stopped and actions should be taken in way to curb such practices. This can campaign are used by food, toy and many companies which infuse children towards their products. Also it's parents duty keep their young away from such wrong influences which are not good for their development of children. For example a Television advertisement showing bribery or murder would obviously a bad influence and can lead to the worst that can affect a young mind.
On conclusion, I am of the opinion that advertisement campaign directed towards young child should be regulated or completely stopped as soon as possible. This is because it influences the minds of the young at very young age and could lead to a bad practices in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, of course, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 381.0 270.72406181 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92913385827 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68816893634 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 145.348785872 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538057742782 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7558552381 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.9 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 4.45695364238 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199465265035 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683866294992 0.0996497079465 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485133094992 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135465003022 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318665205917 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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