Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I am agree with this prompt that students are more influenced by the teachers than by their friends. Teachers are most important person for every student's life after their parents. Teachers are always trying to give proper instructions to their students also teachers are the role model for students.
When i was in high school, My chemistry teacher was my role model. Because he is the very best in our school and his teaching skills was so good. His personality and behavior attracts me most. I was trying to follow his every steps and my aim was to be like him. He always helps every student and gives proper advice. In class 8, I was failed in chemistry exam because i could not focus in class. He told me to meet him after class. When i was going in his office, he says what is our problem tell me in details. Then i says to him that i had some family problems. He listens all of my problems and gives some instructions. This advice helps me to overcome my problem and after this incident i was a big fan of him. Still now I admire him most and trying to keep up his advice.
Friends are always trying to give you a bad advice. A bad friend is enough to destroy someone's life. When i was young i met with my neighbour and he was my classmate. So we was going with class and hang out together. But after some day, my friend asked me to take drugs. It will help your preparation for your exam. I was so naive that i take his decision so easily and i take drugs and smoke cigarettes.Then it was my habit and i was doing from hiding my parents. But somehow my parents knowing my activities and they asked me about this. I was so frightened that i could not utter any words. But my parents was so understanding that the told me to give up all bad habits and stay away my friends. From this day, I did not meet with my friend.
Teachers are highly skilled and more experienced. They know how to control students and help students. They are trying to influence students by their attitude and behaviour. They always know what is important and what is good for student's future. They are trying to work with this way. But friends are same age. They did not know how to give advice and they did not what is good o bad for future.
Teachers are always wanted that their students do good things and follow their instructions. They are behaving better with students for this reason students are more influenced by teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 10.4613686534 335% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 7.30242825607 329% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 93.0 22.412803532 415% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1373.03311258 144% => OK
No of words: 452.0 270.72406181 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38716814159 5.08290768461 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3735989392 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41592920354 0.540411800872 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 419.366225166 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 3.25607064018 645% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 13.0662251656 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2013281153 49.2860985944 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.6571428571 110.228320801 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9142857143 21.698381199 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.05714285714 7.06452816374 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178293962163 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572504847601 0.0996497079465 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950415633755 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174915274476 0.162205337803 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148201377101 0.0443174109184 334% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.3589403974 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 53.8541721854 157% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 11.0289183223 40% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 12.2367328918 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.42419426049 75% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.2008830022 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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