Do you agree or disagree with this following statement,the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reason and example to support your answer
Taking trip is considered as one of the most delightful activities that people do, it is also strongly recommended by psychologist as way of taking away from depression and increasing longevity as result ,each individual desire to turn traveling into a better and more beneficial experience , personally i tend to be with a group wherease other may hold opposite view .in the following paragraphs i will advocate my view for.
some reason .
When a professional one accomany trippers , traveling will be a mre instructive experience.
Most of people are just pursuing pleasuring from their trip ,they observ tourism's attractions ,wherease almost know nothing about their historical backgroud ,but tour leaders usually have broad information about such affairs buildings' architecture , people who used to live there snd so on , tour guides' knowledge is not limited to places ,they also are familiar with customs and rituals belonging to a certain region and by itroducing them traveler no only recognize them but also will be able to communicate with inhabitants .for example we have so much annual religious ceremony in our country and when tourists participate in them ,feel getting close to nattives .
Second,traveling on tour is more arranged, tours's guider usually create a schedule beforehand and decide based on that .tour leader 's acquaintance about a certain place lead to group's members attraction even ones which are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most appropriate possible form , even the time of eating meals is preordained .so passengers will have minimum wasted time and maximum efficiency from traveling .personally every time i intend to go on trip for just one day ,doubtlessly i will choose a group guiding by aleader ,in order to dont miss visiting anywhere.
Third tour leadering could be a source of income for both country and guiders .Appointing tour leaders in historical buildings is somehow creating a job's position and tourism foundation pay them salary .also
if a country purposes to make money from tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe some experts in traveling who are aware enough to introduce the country's attractions ,and encourage people to opt their country as their travel's destination.
Consequently ,i put in proposal that both people and governments have to pay more attention to getting help from tour leader, specially government should persuade students to follow this job academicly .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, second, so, third, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1373.03311258 155% => OK
No of words: 399.0 270.72406181 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32581453634 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96845078678 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 145.348785872 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 419.366225166 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 21.2450331126 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.71825633 49.2860985944 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.571428571 110.228320801 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 21.698381199 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06452816374 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 77.0 4.19205298013 1837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131645113916 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653793484183 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212062328781 0.0662205650399 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589179826067 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219951847412 0.0443174109184 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.3589403974 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 53.8541721854 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.0289183223 242% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.42419426049 133% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 63.6247240618 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.498013245 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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