Do you agree or disagree with this following statement the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
Use specific reason and example to support your answer
parisa Mohammadi:
Taking trip is considered as one of the most delightful activities that people do, it is also strongly recommended by psychologist as way of taking away from depression and increasing longevity as result ,each individual desire to turn traveling into a better and more beneficial experience , personally i tend to be with a group wherease other may hold opposite view .in the following paragraphs i will advocate my view for.
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Taking trip accompanied a professional one in traveling is more instructive.
Most of us just take a ticket and observe tourism's attraction wherease ,almost know nothing about the history behind them ,but tour leader usually have broad information about buildings' architecture , people who used to live there , but their knowledge is not limited to it ,they are familiar with customs and rituals belonging to a certain region therefore tourists not only recognize them but also will be able to communicate with inhabitants .in addition ,tasing new foods, which are made just in a specific area, is one of the most exciting part of traveling ,unfortunately most of people have no idea where they can serve the best one .but tour guider take group's memeber in a right place.
Second,traveling on tour is more arranged, tours usually create a schedule beforehand and appointe a person who is called tour leader to guide groups based on that .tour leader 's acquaintance about a certain place lead to group's member wont miss visiting any of attraction even ones which are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most appropriate possible form , even the time of eating meals is decided in advance .so participants will have minimum wasted time and maximum efficiency .
Third ,Appointing tour leaders in historical buildings creats more job's position , also
if a country purposes to make money from tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe some experts in traveling who are aware enough to introduce the country's attractions ,and encourage people to opt their country as their travel's destination.
Consequently ,i put in proposal that both people and governments have to pay more attention to getting help from tour leader, specially government should persuade students to follow it academicly .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27807486631 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95655389559 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633689839572 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.181645845 48.9658058833 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.0 100.406767564 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4285714286 20.6045352989 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.45110844103 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 5.5376344086 1083% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155289405383 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699987847677 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331116713321 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646782284776 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292947963864 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 11.7677419355 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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