Do you agree or disagree with this following statement the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
Use specific reason and example to support your answer
Travelling is a fun and most exciting event among a group. it is the rudimentary step of refreshment and adventure. To explore new things and places, travelling is the way above any other options. some will support and others will oppose that travel in a group led by a tour guide is the best way. In my view, leading by a guide is the best way to travel in a group for some reasons.
The main reason is that leading by guide for travelling is time and cost saving. it will be easy to organize a tour if a guide will lead. managing various kind of group outing is the main job of the guides. so, they know very well about this as well as very experience. As a result, they can help to plan the group tour which is time-saving. For instance, during out last semester on last year, we organized a group to explore the beauty of our country. At first, we were in hodgepodge situation. it was tough to select places and needed to go personally to see the spots. Doing those staffs were too time consuming and costly because we were in last semester. so, we hired a tour agent as our guide and he made our tour too smooth by giving suggestions and guiding during trip time. this experience taught me that a guide is important to travel in a group.
The another reason is that without guide travelling can be less exciting and has a chance to miss to explore all spectacular scenario of a historical place. For a new traveller group, it will be tought to find out every spots of a place to visit if they have no previous experiences. In this case, a guide can be the best helping person. because a guide must have known everything about a historical place where one should go at least one time. For example, last year after our graduation I went to visit a place near sea beach with my friends. we successfully did out tour but missed the most spectacular scenario. we were unknown about the place at all. we just went there and back after seeing the first waterfalls. after some days of our trip, we came to know that we missed the most alluring waterfalls because it was unknown. so, tour guide is important to travel in a group for making a trip mesmerizing by exploring the beauty.
In a sum, though some may refute the benefits of the guide for group travel, it will help to save time to organize a group tour as well as give the proper direction. so, we can say that it will possible to travel in group but tough. having a guide may bring some extra cost but it will help to manage easily as well as secure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, as to, at least, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32135306554 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40179741004 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448202959831 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4952385126 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4827586207 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3103448276 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10344827586 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174396302744 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560049265186 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559972634427 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13154567674 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616669910591 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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