Driverless cars
Both the reading and the lecture are about driverless cars.
The author of the reading feels that driverless cars or self-driving
cars are really useful and they will positively affect peoples' life.
But the lecturer disputes the claims made in the reading. His position
is that driverless cars will not be an advantage and they will actually
affect peoples' life negatively.
Firstly, the author of the reading points out that driverless cars are
safer than the normal vehicles because they are run by software which
are not supposed to make mistakes. The author gave an example of a car that
run over 700,000 miles without an accident to make his clain stronger.
But the lecturer challenges this point. The lecturer thinks that the
computer system that the driverless cars use are made by humans and
they actually make mistakes. He also mentioned that the car the author
mentions actually hit another car and that incident went viral.
Secondly, the author of the reading opines that the self-driving cars
have good impact over environment because they are meant to be more
efficient than a normal vehicle. He also indicates that drivers typically
need to deal with a lot of traffic and that is why they need to stop and
start the engine frequently. But the self-driving cars does not do that
frequently and therefore, they travel at higher speed as well as they are
environment friendly. But the lecturer disagrees with this point. His
position is that more people will start driving if they have driverless
cars because they don't really need license to drive a car. So, there
will be more car on the streets. Therefore, it will have a bad impact on
the surrounding environment.
Finally, The author of the reading posits that self-driving cars will
save peoples' time because they don't really need to concentrate on driving.
He adds that people can do other things while commuting in a self-driving cars.
The lecturer disputes this point of the author too. He contends that people these days
find driving relaxing. Driverless cars will make people work even when they are
commuting and it is not really a good thing.
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... lecturer disagrees with this point. His position is that more people will start ...
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...they have driverless cars because they dont really need license to drive a car. So,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 360.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06111111111 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51557494103 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438888888889 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7568005728 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7619047619 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.09492273731 757% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360494266936 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129461907996 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124949795265 0.0662205650399 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116080002841 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135711928536 0.0443174109184 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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