edmontosaurs survival
The provided material are concerned with edmontosaurs survival in cold climate such as Alaska's north slope that has several months of total darkness. The author states that the edmontosaurs had to migrate to some warmer regions that facilitate their livings. however, the lecturer repudiates this point through several counterarguments that are as follows.
Initially, the author says that the edmontosaurs' ate plants and because of the cold winter, there were not any plants on north slope and they must migrate to more moderate zones. however, the lecturer explains that north slope were warmer in million years ago and owing to the fact that the sun shone 24 hours some days, some plants were produced and edmontosaurs fed them in dark winters.
Second, the writer thinks that some of edmontosaurs' skeletons which have been digging up from the same site that can support living edmontosaur in herd and helping their migration. Yet again, the speaker underscores that living in herd does not mean migrating hypothesis is correct. A wide array of animals are living in a same place in their whole life, just because of extra protection.
The final contention between the article and lecture is edmontosaurs' ability in running. The author claims that an edmontosaur could run 45 kilometers per hour and could have used this superpower to move from a cold and dark place to a more temperate place. On the other hand, the speaker explains that adult edmontosaurs could run fast, but what if they were not adult. Actually, the juvenile edmontosaurs could not run as fast as their parents and would not survive on own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... regions that facilitate their livings. however, the lecturer repudiates this point thr...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ey must migrate to more moderate zones. however, the lecturer explains that north slope...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...xplains that north slope were warmer in million years ago and owing to the fact that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, second, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 268.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08208955224 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62304674914 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4532071644 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315297630233 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11527898077 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959578738026 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183438787648 0.162205337803 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788993823758 0.0443174109184 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.