Fluoride as a way for treating water
Both the reading and lecture are talking about advantages and disadvantages of adding fluoride to the drinking water. Whereas the author claims that adding fluoride enhances the dental and bone structural health besides the purifying water, the lecturer believes that fluoride's effect can be detrimental to people.
While the reading asserts that existing fluoride in drinking water can prevent the onset of tooth decay, the professor mentions that most of the toothpaste has enough fluoride to protect the teeth, owing to this fact, countries such as Sweden and Netherlands eliminated this substance from their drinking water. Yet, they exhibit no decline in dental health.
The reading next mentions that fluoride can purify the water by acting as cleansing agent, the professor agrees but also says that since the fluoride is toxic, it discolors water pipes and lead to harmful side effects. Therefore, the adding process should be carefully monitored.
Finally, the reading states that the bone structures of people who drink water treated with fluoride have improved. However, the professor counters by saying that the rare form of bone cancer which mostly appears in young boys to is due to deposition of fluoride in the body. She also adds that exposing to the high amount of fluoride causes the bone structures prone to fracture.
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...y exhibit no decline in dental health. The reading next mentions that fluoride ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 214.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30373831776 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46929347267 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 145.348785872 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8979650491 49.2860985944 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.111111111 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06452816374 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287783018299 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117213150224 0.0996497079465 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816261072547 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181517202355 0.162205337803 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200097008074 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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