four-day work week instead of five-day one

Essay topics:

four-day work week instead of five-day one

In the reading passage provides information about mandatory policy which requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek instead of five-day workweek and they will receive 80 percent of their normal pay. The lecturer on the other hand refutes that and brings his points.
First, in the reading passage highlights that shortened workweek would increase company profit, because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer errors in their work. In the other hand professor mentions that in this situation companies should hire more employees and provide for them medical insurance that will cut their profit.
Second, according to the reading passage one of the primary benefits of offering this option is that it would reduce unemployment rate in the country. However, professor brings to the attention the point that companies could demand from employees to do five-day work in four days, so they will be overloaded and in time of crisis employees that work in four day would be fired first.
And finally, the reading passage suggests that employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time they could spend much time with family. While lecturer mentions that this could reduce their personal life and decrease their chance for advancing their career.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, while, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19178082192 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34542346673 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552511415525 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1225906503 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.125 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206949898109 0.272083759551 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833202142957 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124263175739 0.0662205650399 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143138658811 0.162205337803 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133075778082 0.0443174109184 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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