The reading states that the inhospitable and extreme conditions on Venus makes it impossible to maintain a permanent human presence and gives reasons for support. However, the professor explains that although its challenging, yet it is possible to create a permanent station on venus. He elaborates by saying that a station floating in the venus’s atmosphere 50 Km above its surface can solve the problems, thus refuting the points mentioned in the reading.
First, the author posits that as the atmospheric pressure on the venus’s surface is 90 times higher than that of the earth’s, there is possibility that humans will get crushed like the spacecrafts. However, the professor says that the atmospheric pressure 50 Km higher from the surface of venus is lower and equal to that of the earth’s surface, so this would eliminate the danger of getting crushed.
Second, the reading avers that venus has no reservoirs of water on its surface but, Co2, nitrogen, and sulphuric acid, which raises the necessity to supply water and oxygen from the earth. The lecturer provides the solution to this issue by explaining that chemical processes can be carried out using carbon dioxide and nitrogen on the station to make water and oxygen which is essential for human survival. As a result, it will not be necessary to import water and oxygen from earth.
Finally, the author claims that lack of sunlight on venus’s surface due to the clouds will prevent the use of solar power cell. Consequently, there would be no electricity to power the machines. The professor disagrees to this. He mentions that the clouds 50 km above the surface will be less dense. Above that there will be considerable sunlight which can be filtered by station. Also, the sunlight reflected by the clouds can be collected. Thus, solar cells can collect sunlight from both, above and below the clouds.This energy will be more than enough to generate the electricity required to run the station.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 525, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, second, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09785932722 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75768415363 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498470948012 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7518083864 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224573537302 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080324910588 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701028979852 0.0662205650399 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1324731537 0.162205337803 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537221901828 0.0443174109184 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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