Migration in North America
The reading passage states that the first people to migrate to the American continent entered via the Northern Land Bridge. The professor, estimating that period to be between the 11000 - 13000 years ago counters this idea. He claims that studies on archaelogical sites prove that they were older than that and could be dated to as far as 19000 years ago. The Professor continued by saying that there was a group of people that was living in North America 50000 years ago, which casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that argues that the first people migrated 11000 to 13000 years ago.
Although the reading passage mentions that new migrants were isolated in teh Asian side, the professor argues that the oldest remains in North America do not ressemble those of Americans. On the contrary, they are similar to Japanese and Pacific Islands people's.
The reading passage suggests that the first people who crossed the Beringia were the first to occupy North America. The professor contradicts by pronouncing that the DNA o fpeople from siberia depicts that they have migrated in North America 40000 years ago.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that the first people to migrate to the American continent entered via the North...
^^
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions that new migrants were isolated in teh Asian side, the professor argues tha...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 1373.03311258 68% => OK
No of words: 186.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02150537634 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29328855791 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3438221947 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280368483892 0.272083759551 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122114533657 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112139098846 0.0662205650399 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220476722896 0.162205337803 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107018939373 0.0443174109184 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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