mission to Mars TPO INTEGRATED 50
The reading and the lecture are talking about the mission of sending humans to Mars. The reading states that the mission of sending humans to mars has several problems that were not faced by the mission of sending humans to the moon before. However, the lecture disagrees. It claims that the idea of sending humans to mars is challenging and the problems mentioned in the reading have solutions.
First, the reading states that the round trip to Mars takes at least two years. The cargo capacity of the space vehicle is too small to hold enough food, water and oxygen that are required for the 2 years. However, the lecture disagrees. It claims that the hydroponic is a new method can be used to have more food, water and oxygen on the ship. For example, the plant are cultivated in water. It does not take any space. The wasted water can be recycled and evaporated to be used as drinking water. Also the plant are taking carbon dioxide from the air and releasing oxygen.
Second the reading states that the zero gravity has a negative effect on the astronomers . For example, it decreases the muscles mass and lowers the mass density. But, the lecture disagrees. It claims that astronomers know how to deal with the zero gravity negative effect. For example, they could do some regular exercise. Moreover, they can take some vitamins like calcium.
Third the reading states that exposed to dangerous radiations released from the sun has no solution except by adding shield to the ship to protect the astronomer from the radiation and that will increase the weight of the ship. Yet, the lecture disagrees. It claims that the radiations released from the sun are not always dangerous. Astronomers could use special instrument to protect themselves. Furthermore, adding a small shield to the ship will help the astronomers to escape when the dangerous radiations pass.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...king about the mission of sending humans to Mars. The reading states that the mis...
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...re disagrees. It claims that the idea of sending humans to mars is challenging an...
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...tioned in the reading have solutions. First, the reading states that the round...
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...he lecture disagrees. It claims that the hydroponic is a new method can be used t...
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Suggestion: Also,
...vaporated to be used as drinking water. Also the plant are taking carbon dioxide fro...
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...de from the air and releasing oxygen. Second the reading states that the zero ...
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...has a negative effect on the astronomers . For example, it decreases the muscles m...
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...y can take some vitamins like calcium. Third the reading states that exposed to...
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...tes that exposed to dangerous radiations released from the sun has no solution e...
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...gerous radiations released from the sun has no solution except by adding shield ...
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...tion except by adding shield to the ship to protect the astronomer from the radia...
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...un are not always dangerous. Astronomers could use special instrument to protect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, third, at least, for example, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 323.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9133126935 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48636542599 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479876160991 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6887805711 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0434782609 21.698381199 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0680106537036 0.272083759551 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017839976611 0.0996497079465 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427852721229 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425120636 0.162205337803 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617308954317 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.3589403974 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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