Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In order to become financially responsible adults children should learn to manage their own money at young age

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age.

Nowadays it is important to improve your cost management. Most of the people in the world work as much as they can and earning money becomes so difficult today, so it is more important to know how you can manage your money. On the grounds that educating people from when they were child is a very important aspect, so learning about budgetary to the children is the best way to improve the economic sense of the people. In this way, people have more experience with this topic and the mistakes in their decision become less and less. The ensuring paragraphs will elaborate on this claim.
To begin with, the experience is an important part of a person's lifestyle in many fields. In an economical problem, a person who had a lot of experiences from his or her childhood could choose the best way. If children have the right to manage their own money, although, it may exist some little mistake in there or they may waste a lot of money in the way which their parent know about this, this mistake will help them to learn many important things which may help them in the adulthood.
The second point is that, if the children have the righteous to manage their money alone, parents could teach them many fundamental or pivotal things about the economical decision. In this way, children learned many aspects of financial behavior which they have not enough time to learn about it in the years that become older.
The last but not least, if the children manage their money independently, they could make progress in business, which have two important aspects; first, these children had learned much worth information about the business that may improve their lifestyle in the future. The second point is that this education may improve their economical sense and they may become interested in financial work.
To sum up, it is important to learn about children in economical lessons. People, who learned this very important aspect of lifestyle, will be more successful in their decision. Nowadays, lots of families have many financial problems and they should teach their children about this important aspect by let them manage their own money. In this way, we have a good society in the feature in this field.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
...he experience is an important part of a persons lifestyle in many fields. In an economi...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...s that this education may improve their economical sense and they may become interested in...
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...d society in the feature in this field.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80577427822 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42443830384 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443569553806 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2066542464 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4375 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202501193296 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772514798911 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605977969648 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141612436921 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238915175386 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.