Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
In today's constantly connected world the world is changing at a rapid pace because of the actions of humans populations. As the population increases the problem of housing becomes more serious. The issue of how should humans behave and should they migrate or not annually has always been a controversial question among individuals all over the world. This matter can be considered from different aspects so that one can get new insights into this issue. While some people think it seems attractive to move from one town to another town annually, I am inclined that migration has always a considerable number of adverse effects on humans' life and lifestyle. The following paragraphs will illustrate my perspective.
To begin with, although it might seem attractive to change your city as much as you can do, you run the risk of having a great number of problems during your life. I strongly believe that life and lifestyle in any city are different from the other one. As a tangible example, the life in a little town is quite different from the hectic pace of a full-fledged city or metropolis, where the bustling streets are strewn with litters and you can count on spending hours in traffic jams, so I do believe that not only has changing your city or town any beneficial effect on your life, but it also produces a large number of indirect and direct results that are harmful for you.
Furthermore, I firmly believe it is too difficult for individuals to change their habits and lifestyle. I think humans would rather be in their own town than move and change their home from one city to another one, occasionally. Should you be tired of living in a high-rise building near to the industrial zone or a sleepy retirement town without any noise pollution and exciting bars and pulsating nightlife, you can take a weekend trip with your immediate family or your friend to a little change of scenery rather than migrate and live in a different city with strange lifestyle. I do believe that it is always difficult for humans to change their lifestyle. As a concrete example, last year my sister wanted to migrate from her city to ours. Although she is too likeable a person and has a great outgoing personality, she had a considerable problem with both our family and our city, so she decided to come back to her city as soon as possible.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that hardly had people changed their city when they became unwilling. I am in agreement with the former statement and I think should humans change their city as much as they can do, they will never have a beautiful life. All in all, I would prefer to live in my own city as much as possible than change my place once in a while.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...fect on your life, but it also produces a large number of indirect and direct results that are ha...
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... In conclusion, I strongly believe that hardly had people changed their city when they became unw...
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...live in my own city as much as possible than change my place once in a while.
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Suggestion:
...e than change my place once in a while.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66527196653 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61671245037 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470711297071 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.7751447761 48.9658058833 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.888888889 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364874731623 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105159056889 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890153984147 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218525388548 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591083595751 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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