Online graduate degree programs are being offered worldwide In many respects the programs are like the same degree programs available in a traditional campus environment but in several key aspects they are very different First online degree programs do no

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Online graduate degree programs are being offered worldwide. In many respects, the programs are like the same degree programs available in a traditional campus environment, but in several key aspects, they are very different.
First, online degree programs do not offer one-on-one time with the professors. On campus, professors hold regular office hours and expect to have conferences with their graduate students. In addition, many opportunities present themselves for informal interactions before and after class or in chance meetings on campus. Some professors invite their graduate students to their homes or otherwise make themselves available in semi-social settings. In contrast, online professors are unable to see their graduate students in person and, consequently, do not know them very well.

In this set of material the subjet is about the online graduate degree programs. In the reading pasage mention someones disadvantage of this method while in the listening passage mentioned advantage of this new form to obtain a degree.

In the reading passage mentioned three disadvantage of the online graduate degree programas. The first disadvantage is the lack of the interaction beweeten the professor and the student. Actually, the professor work from their home. But in the listening passage the professor mentionend that some advantage is the comunication, for example the email, telephon etc.

Other disdavantage that was mentioned in the reading passage is the quality in the news graduate degree programs. The courses are easy to the estudents because they complete very fast. Hovewer, in the listening passage the profesor said that the dicipline and the manage of the time are habits in the students. The thechonology is the perfect tool to the students.

Finnally, in the reading passage mentioned that the top school no offer online graduate programs. The top schools not considers like a good alternative theses programs, but in the listening passage, the professor mentioned that the Princeton Univesirty has a graduate degree program and other top schools have the same opportunity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he profesor said that the dicipline and the manage of the time are habits in the students ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, so, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 206.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27669902913 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75365976408 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 145.348785872 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470873786408 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 13.0662251656 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 206.0 21.2450331126 970% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.2860985944 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1087.0 110.228320801 986% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 206.0 21.698381199 949% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 44.0 7.06452816374 623% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279668535626 0.272083759551 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.279668535626 0.0996497079465 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177808559284 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755835017436 0.0443174109184 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.4 13.3589403974 796% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -146.07 53.8541721854 -271% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.8 11.0289183223 769% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.53 8.42419426049 208% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.7273730684 531% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.4 10.498013245 804% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 85.0 11.2008830022 759% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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