Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
In this si topic very intresting. From my point of view I think that Nelson Mandela is other person that contribuited in the the human rights in the all the world. Actually, Nelson Mandela recived the Novel Price of the peace by his work in Africa.
The first reason is that Nelson Mandela win a Novel price specifically the Novel price by the peace. When the people win this award is because their work was very hard. The winner of this award have been victims of the goberment and some they have been in the jail by many yerars.
The second reason is that He faight by the human raights. Nelson Mandela born in Africa, specifically in Sudafrica. He was president and always worked by their country and by their people. He had ideas to help to the people in their country. He wanted eliminated the poor and other problems.
The third reason is the fight by the human rights in Africa. Mandela went to the university in the Uk. He was a lawyer for this reason he fight by the human rights because in Africa in this moment have a bad goverment.
Other reason is that Nelson Mandela did charities. Africa is the continente more poor in the world. The people need help and the charities is a way to help.
In resume, I consider that Nelson Madela is other person that made important contributions to the people of Africa where are the people more poor, and he wants change their political system. Nowadays the human rights are importants to all the world, thanks to Nelson Mandela .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, so, third, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49253731343 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2267461254 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39552238806 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 268.0 20.1344086022 1331% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1204.0 100.406767564 1199% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 268.0 20.6045352989 1301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 59.0 5.45110844103 1082% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123780332107 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123780332107 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724764148503 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401500963371 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 133.7 11.7677419355 1136% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -183.62 58.1214874552 -316% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 105.5 10.1575268817 1039% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.99 8.01818996416 237% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 10.002688172 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 109.2 10.0537634409 1086% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.247311828 517% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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