pterosaurs
According to this passage, the author give some examples to prove that pterosaurs may are capable of powered flight. However, the listening material casts serious doubt on what the author claims.
First of all, the author asserts that pterosaur is possibly cold-blooded animal.This kind of animal always can not do some motions like flying.But the speaker contends that they are warm-blooded animal because they can dance cooperated with others in the recent research, whereas cold-blooded animals almost can not dance.
Secondly, the pterosaurs are usual heavy as the author claims,so they have been limited to the speed of flap wings.On the contrary, the professor gives a possibility that maybe their bones are not solid, is hollow, so they can also are bulky but not heavy too much.
Finally, author wants to contend that the pterosaurs' legs are too weak to let them run fast or jump high to fly. Also, the professor alleges that they have four legs to push them off the land instead of two hinds, even their legs'muscles are not so strong, but it is enough for them to launch.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...erosaur is possibly cold-blooded animal.This kind of animal always can not do some m...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ays can not do some motions like flying.But the speaker contends that they are warm...
^^^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...urs are usual heavy as the author claims,so they have been limited to the speed of ...
^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...been limited to the speed of flap wings.On the contrary, the professor gives a pos...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, kind of, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 1373.03311258 66% => OK
No of words: 183.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96721311475 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46485039576 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633879781421 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0372395953 49.2860985944 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.5 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 21.698381199 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 7.06452816374 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183672412422 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989114027175 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797349852518 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114422487739 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209786789338 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.3589403974 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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