pterosaurs'flying
According to this passage, the author give some examples to prove that pterosaurs maybe have the capable of powered flight.However, the listening matirel casts serious doubt on what the reading claims.
First of all, the author asserts that pterosaurs are possibaly cold-blooded animal.This kind of animal always can not do some motions like flying.But the speaker contends that they are warm-blooded animal because they can dance corporated with others in the recently reseach, whereas cold-blooded animals almost can not dance.
Secondly, the pterosaurs have a heavy weight as the author claims,so they have been limited to the speed of flap wings.On the contrary, the professor give an possibility that their bone maybe not solid,like airbone, so they can also have a bunky size but not heavy too much.
Finally, author want to contends that the pterosaurs' legs is too weak to let them run fast or jump high to a fly. Also, the professor alleges that they have four legs to push them off the land instead of two hinds, even their legs'muscle is not so strong, but it is enough for them to launch.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...aybe have the capable of powered flight.However, the listening matirel casts serious do...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...saurs are possibaly cold-blooded animal.This kind of animal always can not do some m...
^^^^
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ays can not do some motions like flying.But the speaker contends that they are warm...
^^^
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...nce. Secondly, the pterosaurs have a heavy weight as the author claims,so they have been ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...have a heavy weight as the author claims,so they have been limited to the speed of ...
^^^
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...been limited to the speed of flap wings.On the contrary, the professor give an pos...
^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ngs.On the contrary, the professor give an possibility that their bone maybe not s...
^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , like
...sibility that their bone maybe not solid,like airbone, so they can also have a bunky ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'contend'.
Suggestion: contend
...vy too much. Finally, author want to contends that the pterosaurs legs is too weak to...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, kind of, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 185.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61693088296 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5584334599 49.2860985944 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.0 110.228320801 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 21.698381199 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06452816374 311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0799288334748 0.272083759551 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474814252538 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284206382338 0.0662205650399 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502128024712 0.162205337803 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102917435947 0.0443174109184 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.3589403974 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.0289183223 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 63.6247240618 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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