Question : Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage.
The lecture is disagreeing with the passage. There are three different reasons mentioned in the passage to demonstrate the fact, the silver coin is not original. On the other hand, the lecture estimates the reasons in the passage to improve that, the theory can be true and the coin perhaps is a pice real historical evidence.
To begin with, the passage says this amount of distance between the location that coin was found and the site that Norse has been discovered is not believable. In comparison, the lecture says this can not be a good reason, because, North Americans had a good relationship with Europe. Thus, It can be possible that they went there and on their way back, they just bring silver coins with them.
the second reason is that the passage says there isn't any other coin in the area. However, the lecture says it can not be an appropriate reason, because there are lots of other European valuable objects in that area and the silver coin can be one of them.
the last reason is that passage says the coin was not valuable in America, In contrast, the lecture says it can possible that European people traveled there and they just pack all their valuable objects for a trip. And the coin was one of them and they returned the objects to Europe.
- Directions You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage Typicall 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd the silver coin can be one of them. the last reason is that passage says the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, thus, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 226.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61061946903 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31281793305 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455752212389 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9055107178 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06452816374 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140722455693 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689448125463 0.0996497079465 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296782156891 0.0662205650399 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10080874873 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222589711286 0.0443174109184 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.42419426049 83% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 63.6247240618 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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