Do you agree or disagree with the following sentence.
Teachers should not make their political or social views known to students in classroom.
tempt people to follow your believes is not appropriate behavior overall. in teachers case it is not professional at all and they should not talk about political or social views in classroom.i explore my reasons in following essay.
first of all talking about personal views in politics or social area can affect on students mind and the way they thought , on the other hand maybe some students raise in families with different views. showing them different views about this topic without any good explanation can confuse them and maybe affect on their personality and behavior . although i have a similar experience like this. i had a extremis religious professor in university, he always talked about the religious he believed and the rules and my family are kind of person that have exactly opposite opinion and in that semester i was confused and every day i thought about this am i thinking right?or my family are good people or this man is and everyday i wa like this
secondly, this kind of topics in classes especially in teenagers classes have really long last effect, because in that age students are so sensitive and they are grown up with maturity. give information in this areas with out parents promotion or enough and correct details can make them completely to a unsocial person or in some ways maybe extremist person.
in conclusion, if each person learn about this topics in their own families or with reading and reliable references is really better and teachers should not s how their personal views in classes it has negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, kind of, talking about, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89772727273 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57668032056 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.412158724 48.9658058833 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.625 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.625 5.45110844103 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187175412154 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944179083987 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081338083365 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136418679249 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629753565704 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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