Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The Internet should be like other services (such as roads), and government should provide it to the public at no cost.
I speculate government should open internet service to the public. Because in this century internet and social medias are momentous to people. Actually, the individuals’ life will be stopped somhow. Accordingly, publicity of the internet is a really accurent decision. Moreover, It can improve life quality and help students to improve their knowleage; Furthermore, It can help our older generation to adapt theirselves with young generations. I will explore my viewpoint in the following essay.
Firstly, In this circcomstand, the quality of life in different cities and areas will increas. The poblicity of internet can help to decreas the traffic and, as a concequence, it will give us clear air.For instance, when people acces to the internet in every locations, they will be able to do their works from home or in their office, thus they don’t need go to bank or perhaps, they can order their goods. Therefore they don’t need go out that much and it will help the quality of the city and, beside this, it can open some job spots for delivery people or other careers.
Secondly, If we ideate about specific groups, with internet and social medias, students can improve their knowleage. To illustrate more, they can ulitize the internet to search the articles and different books and magazins online whenever and anywhere they want. For this generation, I mean young individuals, this index can change the students’ attitude and dare them to learn more and simulate them to study about other titles despite their majore courses.
thirdly, Nowadays we can see how much families are seperat from eachother and this is due to the different vision about technology. According to prior statement, internet can change the old generation’s vision and it can help them to get closer to their childrens and their young relatives. Thus, it can be beneficial for everyone.
In conclusion, I ideate that, internet is an essencial issue for living this days and the government should open the acces of it for every one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08408408408 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72626366932 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2934843159 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128356616728 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579052805827 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726981554068 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835396477179 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515231788563 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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