QUESTION
Summarize the points in the lecture, being sure to explain how they address the specific ideas about solar energy described in the reading passage.
As the argument on the reading passage the lecture does mention solar technology as the clean renewable source and the no cost after establishment ensures the long run profit. Apart from that, the lecture provides, the reasons of adopting solar energy, other than renewable clean energy. It gives three important features that solar energy provides us as key for alluring to the people towards it. At first, the features offsetting initial price is one of the main advantages of using solar energy. It conceded that solar panel indeed needs more fossil fuel to be built, but, it offsets its cost so immediately. Secondly, the multifaceted features is another features of solar technology in which people can use its energy in multiple purpose in control way. The heater run by solar energy can efficiently utilize the power to make it more useful. At last, the profit generation is another main advantages of using solar technology in which people have to face low maintenance cost but, long run profit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 167.0 270.72406181 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0119760479 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55710358217 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 145.348785872 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4033448734 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.625 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110762229404 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536607922313 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183430806379 0.0662205650399 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110762229404 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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