The lecture and the reading are both about an animal Repenomamus robustus whether was a hunter or not.The author of the reading believes that R. robustus was scavenger.The lecturer casts doubt on claims made by the author.She notes that the mammal was an active hunter.
First of all,the author argues that R. robustus was small in the size of domestic cat.The article mentions that with such a little height, this creature could not hunt.This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer.She states that robustus was twice as massive as young child of psittacosaurs. Additonally,professor thinks its weight was much more than prey's,which can ease hunting process for R. robustus.
Secondly,the writer suggests that an evidence about legs support the fact that these animals were egg-eater.In the article,it is said that their short legs restricted the pursuit of preys.The lecturer,however,rebuts this by mentioning Tasmanian Devil.She elaborates on this by bringing up the point that since this modern critter can move fast with short legs, the Repenomamus robustus could chase their foods with high speed, meaning that it was an active predator.
Finally,the author posits that there are not marks of teeth on eaten dinosaur's bones.Moreover,it is pointed out R. robustus found not protected nest with eggs(inside the eggshell were small baby psittacosaur) and then swallowed them.In contrast,the lecturer claims that there were firm jaws of the ancient mammal for grabbing and holding on prey.She thinks that the predator did not used back teeth to bite and swallowed its prey as a whole or in large parts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34117647059 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09847601785 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.588531963 49.2860985944 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.25 110.228320801 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 7.06452816374 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 4.19205298013 644% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233799122391 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956996197843 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875121419902 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1578555665 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782462324192 0.0443174109184 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.3589403974 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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