The reading states that laser vision correction surgery is unlikely become popular due to medical and economic problems. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. She thinks that this operation is likely rise in demand.
The reading and the lecture discuss laser vision correction surgery. The author believes that this procedure is unlikely become popular due to medical and economic problems. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. She thinks that this operation is likely rise in demand.
Another controversial issue is post-operative problems. The author asserts that there were cases of cornea detachment after surgery, furthermore, sometimes recovery time takes months. The lecturer rebuts this argument, suggesting that it happened only in extreme event such as Everest climbing and elaborates on this by mentioning that healing time usually takes not more than few days.
Another controversial issue is the problems that arise right after the surgery. The author asserts that patients go through a long rehab period. The lecturer rebuts this argument, suggesting that few such cases are the exception rather than a rule. Moreover, the lecturer mentions that the average healing period is less than three days.
The third aspect of the debate is the period of the positive effect. According to the reading, the effect is unclear. Moreover, a number of patients have to go back to a doctor after four-five years after their surgery. The professor, on the other hand, posits that the effect lasts as long more than twenty years, while on average it is decades-long.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...riod. The lecturer rebuts this argument, suggesting that few such cases are the e...
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...osits that the effect lasts as long more than twenty years, while on average it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, third, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 220.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26363636364 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59678758953 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559090909091 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2116762656 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262309195149 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951882455414 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127633351946 0.0662205650399 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200686165032 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277106972211 0.0443174109184 625% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.0289183223 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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