Solitary Whale and its unusual high-pitch song.
The reading states that there is a solitary and unusual whale whose song has a much higher pithch than all other known whales, and also the author provides three reasons to explain this differences. However the lecturer explains that the scientists' attempts to illustrate this differences are fault and this has been remaned a mestory.
First, the article states that this whale may be an offspring of twoe whales being different species that can produce hybrid offspring having a combinition of their parents characterestics. However, the professor is saying that whales are migrating grouply and it is unusual to think their migration pattern has been different and they do not migrate loanly.
Second, there is a theory says that it is possible fo this whale to have a damaged sense of hearing because whales as humns try to immitate songs they hear and having a problem with hearing caused a different form of song they produced. However, the professor refutes this point by saying that this high-pitch whale's song is depended on physical structures of their throu ,and also he says producing this song is unusaul and cannot be connected with damaged sense of hearing.
Third, the article avers that this kind of whale is probable a rare species and most of them waither are gone or has died out. The speaker opposes this point by saying that even if this whale was rare, its parents must had been rare but the our technologies have been used for many decays and the never before heard such song.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ee reasons to explain this differences. However the lecturer explains that the scientis...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed on physical structures of their throu ,and also he says producing this song is ...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...are, its parents must had been rare but the our technologies have been used for many de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88326848249 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42912525774 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 21.2450331126 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6482535181 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.875 110.228320801 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 21.698381199 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06452816374 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265549982036 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105198721658 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617100474193 0.0662205650399 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14234851857 0.162205337803 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375735661161 0.0443174109184 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.3589403974 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.8541721854 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.498013245 141% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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