Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？
Being creative, rather than planning carefully, helps people come up with the best solution to a problem.
In the modern world, we have surronded by nomeruos and copmlex problems in our daily lives. So improtant is using a best approch to deal with these problems, that the people using differnt ways to come over their problems. The controversial question which arises here is whether using the creative approches can be helpful or making detailed plans. As far as I am concerned, I agree with being creative. I elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first reason I want to point out is that being creative push you toward using a variuse solutions. Being creative would be an asset to a person seeking to best solutions of his/her problems. people who are innovative have the ability of making short and simple solutions to their problems; therefore, they will not be confuse in facing the new problems. Moreover, the found new ways they have achieved might be a low-cost solutions, so they don't need to affort costs such taking musch to planning and keep going step by step gradually to find the solutions. Take my experice as an example, when I was a students in the university I had to find a short appeoch to perform a project just in one month. Then, I used a approch of dividing the project into three part to perform them pararelly whith the hepls of my ferinds, so I could to finish my task at the approprite time.
The next reason is about making new approches they have never used. Not only use the creative people short and brief ways of solutions, but also they can make new approches that reject former solutions and provide much benefits. Accordingly, innovative people will endowing new ways to come over their problems with the less harmfulness. In addition, with creative thinking it would be posible to use some tools which are not relatet appearently, but they can make conections between them and their problems to build a new approch. Hence, they have more options in making solutions by having the ability of using differnt tools. Had I have a creative mind, I would have obtained some new ways to come up best solutions to my family's problems.
All in all, should you want to know which kind of people can find the best solution to their problems, I suggest you to see the approaches that crative people use to. They have the ability of making short, simple, new ways in which they don't need to spent much time and also, they can use divers tools to come over their problems. Try to learn form them and try to learn how to use your creative minds, it is better for you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... our daily lives. So improtant is using a best approch to deal with these problem...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...e would be an asset to a person seeking to best solutions of his/her problems. people w...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... to best solutions of his/her problems. people who are innovative have the ability of ...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'solution'?
Suggestion: solution
... they have achieved might be a low-cost solutions, so they dont need to affort costs such...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... might be a low-cost solutions, so they dont need to affort costs such taking musch ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...e my experice as an example, when I was a students in the university I had to find a short...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...project just in one month. Then, I used a approch of dividing the project into th...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...hat reject former solutions and provide much benefits. Accordingly, innovative peopl...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'endow'
Suggestion: endow
...ts. Accordingly, innovative people will endowing new ways to come over their problems wi...
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Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... ability of using differnt tools. Had I have a creative mind, I would have obtained ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'up the best'.
Suggestion: up the best
...uld have obtained some new ways to come up best solutions to my familys problems. Al...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63310961969 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4591147023 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474272930649 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2950343573 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.55 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.35 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220958921765 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800694219415 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587888631274 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153864626784 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462429352849 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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