Spartacus the rebel leader who fought against the Romans with an army of fellow escaped slaves is one of the most famous figures in ancient Roman history Spartacus led his men against their Roman oppressors and managed to defeat the Roman army in several | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Spartacus: the rebel leader who fought against the Romans with an army of fellow escaped slaves, is one of the most famous figures in ancient Roman history. Spartacus led his men against their Roman oppressors and managed to defeat the Roman army in several battles. Eventually Spartacus and his army were defeated and put to death. To this day，Spartacus fascinates both historians and the general public. Several aspects about his story have made him a particularly appealing hero.
Firs，Spartacus‘ original goal in his conflict against Rome is one everyone can empathize with-he wanted to return home Spartacus and his men had been taken by the Romans from faraway lands In fighting the Romans, Spartacus and his men initially sought to return to the homelands from which they had been uprooted Spartacus and his men's desire to return home is one we can all appreciate.
Second, Spartacus' initial success in fighting against the powerful Roman army has earned him the admiration people feel when someone who is overmatched triumphs through sheer skill. Spartacus and his men formed a relatively small, ill-equipped army; the Roman army? in contrast, was large, well-financed, and highly trained. Spartacus' ability to seriously trouble the Romans on the battlefield testifies to his military brilliance, making him a hero in most people's eyes.
Third, in fighting against Rome: Spartacus sought to liberate all Roman slaves and thus commanded respect as an early human rights advocate. Before his final battle with the Romans, Spartacus was sent an offer by a Roman general: if Spartacus would stop fighting, he would be made a Roman senator, a member of Rome's powerful elite: and his men would be freed. However, Spartacus rejected this offer because it would have left the institution of slavery in place.

Without any shadow of doubt, Spartacus is the most famous slave in the Roman era. Indeed he has many achievements against the Romans at that time. In the passage, the author concentrates on several arguments to prove that Spartacus was an appealing hero base on his story. However, the lecturer cast doubt on these arguments and respectively points out the problems with all author's assertions, especially the historical aspect of the claims that the author made.
To commence, according to the passage the main goal of Spartacus and his men was to return to their homelands. The lecturer, however, highlighted the fact that they had many chances to go back to their home based on the lands they controlled, but, they preferred to stay for other goals. She states that they had other goals like revenge and private benefits.
Moreover, the author mentions that Spartacus had many successes in the initial battles against equipped Roman army. The author believes that he was an astute person. Conversely, with reference to the account of the lecturer, we can not say that he was genuine based on a few battels. In addition, Romans sent a small army to fight again Spartacus at first, and when they sent a good army, Romans won the battle.
The last point discussed in the passage has to do with the historical point that Spartacus aimed to liberate all Roman slaves, it also, refers to an offer by a Roman general for their liberation that was rejected by Spartacus. On the contrary, the lecturer brings up the fact that this issue is not based on a historical fact and people made it during the anti-slave movement in the 8 century. In fact, they needed to have a hero for their movement and they selected Spartacus.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, moreover, so, as to, in addition, in fact, on the contrary, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79797979798 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55342311762 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.968204176 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.785714286 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291522394196 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104192884945 0.0996497079465 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091333955545 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176624098317 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729267132232 0.0443174109184 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, moreover, so, as to, in addition, in fact, on the contrary, with reference to

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